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PROLOGUE: MONOLOGUE OF MANITO by CHRISwillar PROLOGUE: MONOLOGUE OF MANITO by CHRISwillar
This is the first draft of a prologue to a story I'm currently working on.

Manito is the God ("Great Spirit") of the Cree Indians, he's the positive energy that flows through everything.

»PROPER CREDIT IF TAKING OUT - CHRISWILLAR«
»PLEASE ASK BEFORE USING, DUE TO COPYRIGHTS«
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This was interesting, to say the least. I got confused in the middle though, especially when he started talking about hugging fish and being a waterbed for the "growing spawns". So, I understand he is everything and anything, but I'm not sure if he just was and always is this way, or became this way after something. I get the feeling he became this way, but I could be wrong. I like the background, and the lighting effect, which seems to shine down from heaven itself, is pretty cool. The only suggestion I would have is maybe change the font, and if you explain something about the monologue in your description that answers any of my questions, then I am sorry for not reading that first.
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Jacob-Cross Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Wow
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CHRISwillar Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I hope it was a good 'wow' :aww:
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Jacob-Cross Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
It was :D
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CHRISwillar Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you~ :hug:
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Jacob-Cross Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Your welcome ^^
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CHRISwillar Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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Jacob-Cross Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
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